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pick one paragraph for the essay that his been returned. Review the feedback and write this one paragraph incorporating the feedback. It goes without saying that you should pick the paragraph that needs the most work, please. Don't use this as an opportunity to do an additional paragraph - I want you to specifically and actively engage with this feedback. Largely you will be looking to remove descriptive elements and add greater depth to your analysis. These can be typed since that will help with the editing process. Remember this is your essay week for me this should take a substantial amount of time.